Sunday, 30 September 2018

September 2018 Overall


August Overall: https://www.deviantart.com/brenorenz/journal/August-2018-Overall-762023519

Church notes - 2nd September 2018: https://www.deviantart.com/brenorenz/journal/Church-notes-2-September-2018-762211091

Doctor Who: Changes in Time and Space - Chapter 32 - Part 1: http://fardell34.blogspot.com/2018/09/doctor-who-changes-in-time-and-space.html

Rise of Weirdness - Part 16: http://fardell34.blogspot.com/2018/09/rise-of-weirdness-part-16.html

Doctor Who: Changes in Time and Space - Chapter 32 - Part 2: http://fardell34.blogspot.com/2018/09/doctor-who-changes-in-time-and-space_6.html

The Princess and the Frog rating: http://fardell34.blogspot.com/2018/09/the-princess-and-frog-rating.html

Rise of Weirdness - Part 17: https://fardell34.blogspot.com/2018/09/rise-of-weirdness-part-17.html

Doctor Who: Changes in Time and Space - Chapter 32 - Part 3: https://twitter.com/fardell24/status/1038233923958886400

Church notes - 9th September 2018: https://twitter.com/fardell24/status/1038652428780855296

Experiencing the Psalms - Sermon List: https://twitter.com/fardell24/status/1038662008269201409

Rise of Weirdness - Part 18: https://twitter.com/fardell24/status/1038685150106726400

Rise of Weirdness - Stage 2: https://twitter.com/fardell24/status/1038710138339643392

Doctor Who: Changes in Time and Space - Chapter 32 - Part 4: https://twitter.com/fardell24/status/1039084239445098503

Doctor Who: Changes in Time and Space - Chapter 32 - Links: https://fardell24.livejournal.com/321968.html

Rise of Weirdness - Part 19: https://fardell24.dreamwidth.org/256396.html

Doctor Who: Changes in Time and Space - Chapter 33: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/178057272975/doctor-who-changes-in-time-and-space-chapter

Rise of Weirdness - Part 20: https://www.deviantart.com/brenorenz/journal/Rise-of-Weirdness-Part-20-764002420

Church notes - 16th September 2018: http://fardell34.blogspot.com/2018/09/church-notes-16-september-2018.html

Doctor Who: Changes in Time and Space - Chapter 34: https://twitter.com/fardell24/status/1041251834751475713

Bible Study - Psalms Series Overview: https://fardell24.dreamwidth.org/257276.html

Doctor Who: Changes in Time and Space - Chapter 35 - Part 1: https://fardell24.dreamwidth.org/257384.html

Rise of Weirdness - Part 21: https://fardell24.dreamwidth.org/257646.html

Doctor Who Changes in Time and Space - Chapter 35 - Part 2: https://fardell24.dreamwidth.org/257812.html

Church notes - 23rd September 2018: https://fardell24.dreamwidth.org/258133.html

Engineer and the Time Lady - Ship plans v1: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/178375062830/the-engineer-and-the-time-lady-notes-star

Doctor Who: Changes in Time and Space - Chapter 35 - Part 2: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/178409380670/doctor-who-changes-in-time-and-space-part-3

Rise of Weirdness - Part 22: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/178409733940/rise-of-weirdness-part-22

Rise of Weirdness - Stage 3: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/178409835950/rise-of-weirdness-stage-3

The Matrix Revolutions review: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/178475080485/the-matrix-revolutions-review

Engineer and the Time Lady - Story v1: https://www.deviantart.com/brenorenz/journal/The-Engineer-and-the-Time-Lady-v1-765606894

Rise of Weirdness - Part 23: https://www.deviantart.com/brenorenz/journal/Rise-of-Weirdness-Part-23-765735206

Math101 Revision - Lecture 14: https://www.deviantart.com/brenorenz/journal/Math-101-Revision-Lecture-14-765815224

Church notes - September 2018: https://www.deviantart.com/brenorenz/journal/Church-notes-September-2018-766153752

Church notes - 30th September 2018: https://www.deviantart.com/brenorenz/journal/Church-notes-30th-September-2018-766156227

Church notes in 2018 so far: http://fardell34.blogspot.com/2018/09/church-notes-in-2018-so-far.html

Rise of Weirdness - Part 24: http://fardell34.blogspot.com/2018/09/rise-of-weirdness-part-24.html

Rise of Wierdness - Stage 4: http://fardell34.blogspot.com/2018/09/rise-of-weirdness-stage-4.html


Rise of Weirdness - Stage 4


Part 23 - 1965 - 1967: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/178507175650/rise-of-weirdness-part-23, https://www.deviantart.com/brenorenz/journal/Rise-of-Weirdness-Part-23-765735206

Part 24 - 1968 - Mid 1972: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/178597722175/rise-of-weirdness-part-24, http://fardell34.blogspot.com/2018/09/rise-of-weirdness-part-24.html


Rise of Weirdness - Part 24


January 1, 1968
The United States again demand that any Orichalum that lands in Canadian territory be turned over to them...


January 7, 1968:
Indian Prime Minister Deen Dayal Upadhyaya announces its sudden withdrawal from the United Nations in San Francisco, California, sparking international controversy,...


January 14, 1968:
M.N. Govindan Nair leads calls for a Communist uprising in Kerala, sparking international attention,...


January 27, 1968
Another hibernating kaiju is discovered near the South Pole.


February 27, 1968
The Anglo-French Union provides additional proof of US support of Zionists in Jericho at the United Nations General Assembly in San Francisco...


April 14, 1968:
Archaeologist Erich von Danken details his theory of "Ancient astronauts", with the publication of Chariots of the Gods in Zofingen, Switzerland, popularising the idea of alien interference during the period of magic starting in c. 3113 BCE,....


April 30, 1968:
Toledo Riots; Anti-Semitic riots erupt in Toledo, Spain, embarassing the Anglo-French Union, highlighting sectarianism in Western Europe,...


May 2-23,1968:
Civil unrest and violence in France and Northern Ireland leads to a violent military/police crackdown in major cities, sparking international attention,....


May 24, 1968:
Alaskan Jewish leaders led by (insert name here) form Kahane Chai in Anchorage, Alaska, calling for the "right of return" of the Jewish people to Palestine, sparking international condemnation and controversy,....


May 26, 1968:
Murville Document; Indian press report documents signed by Foreign Minister Maurice Couve de Murville, seem to implicate the Anglo-French Union in regional conflicts in India,...


July 30, 1968:
International Olympic Committee (IOC) announces that it will be conducting chromosome tests to very gender and Transformed status in Mexico City, Mexico,....


September 2, 1968:
Atlantis Rises; in a massive seismic event, off the coast of Bimini, the remains of Atlantis rise from the ocean floor, sparking civil unrest and panic in the region,....


September 30, 1968:
12 generals incuding Puran Chaand Joshi and M. Kalyanasundaram, are implicated in an abortive coup in New Delhi, with bodies rounded up and dumped in Lok Sabha,


March 29, 1969:
Anglo-French Union singer Frida Boccara guest stars on Doctor Who (BBC-TV) as the Master's Concubine, granting high ratings,...


April 8, 1969:
The Jewish rock band Jericho Jones makes its hit debut in Anchorage, Alaska, with its hit debut "Too Much Love to Hear", sparking national attention,.....


April 19, 1969:
Neopagan singer "Sun-Ra" becomes a symbol of the Transformed movement after his concert in San Jose, California, sparking national attention,...


April 27, 1969:
Right-wing fascist and national John Drick emerges in London, proclaiming the greatness of the Anglo-French Union,...


August 6, 1969:
Baltic Neo-pagans call for the right to migrate to the "State of Aphrodite", before the United Nations General Aassembly,...


July 14, 1969:
U.S. troops are deployed into Honduras, to fight against Communist-backed El Salvador, from securing a foothold in the region.....


October 15, 1969:
The Feanorian Star Political Party led by Veronica Peters calls for "radical revolution" for Neo-pagans and Transformed in Atlanta, Georgia, shocking conservatives,.....


October 27, 1969:
Student groups from the Soviet Union, call upon the "State of Aphrodite" to accept Neo-pagan refugees, sparking international attention,...


January 11, 1970
Chaos occurs at the Superbowl, after Illusionists cause problems...


February 22, 1970:
The First Temple of the Ultimaist religion in Jonesboro, Georgia, attracting many celebrities including Frank Sinatra and Stanley Kubrick,.....

May 2, 1970:
Members of the Feanorian Star Party led by Veronica Peters seize control of government buildings in Savannah, Georgia in an effort to have their political demands and issues heard....


May 4, 1970:
Actress Jane Fonda, sparks national controversy by publicly stating her opposition to the military draft in Los Angeles, California, burning her draft notice, along with those of 200 other men and women opposed to the draft,....


May 22, 1970:
Brussels Riots; anti-Semitic violence erupts in Brussels, Belgium, fueling tensions between the United States and the Anglo-French Union,...

September 7, 1970:
Napoleon written and directed by Stanley Kubrick, starring Marlon Brando, Audrey Hepburn, Ian Holm, and Alec Guiness, makes its hit debut, considered one of the greatest films of all time,....


October 10, 1970:
U.S. military threatens to intervene into Quebec, citing the French nationalist riots in the region, fueling tensions between the United States and the Anglo-French Union,...


November 17, 1970:
Syrian President Nureddin al-Atassi calls for the overthrow of the Palestine government, citing the Ba'ath Party/ Socialist clashes, sparking international attention and concern,....


November 27, 1970:
Pope Paul VI is assassinated in Manila by (insert name here) fueling anti-Transformed sentiment worldwide,...


January 22, 1971:
Singapore Declaration; Anglo-French Union proclaims that the goal for the Commonwealth of Nations is world peace, fueling political and diplomatic tensions with the United States and Soviet Union,....


January 25, 1971:
Transformed General Idi Amin, utilizes his resurrection and control of the dead to seize power in Kampala, Uganda, fueling civil unrest,....


January 28, 1971

A conspiracy theory magazine has it's offices raided by the FBI after it publishes wild theories about the Moon landings (that hew close to the truth).



May 3, 1971:
German Chancellor (insert name here) is elected to the Reichstag on an explicitly anti-Transformed platform,...


August 21, 1971:
Anglo-French Union troops launch a massive crackdown on Costa Rica claiming "Communist infiltration", shocking the international community,...


October 4, 1971:
Rosa Olson becomes the first Transformed playmate featured in Playboy magazine, shocking many audiences,...


October 28, 1971:
A Buddhist Religious denomination announces in Bangkok, Thailand their acceptance of magic practitioners and beings,...


December 17, 1971:
Elves of New York #1 (Marvel Comics) is introduced as a "Transformed" alternative to the mainstream Marvel Universe, sparking reader controversy,...


March 2, 1972:
U.S. President Richard M. Nixon and Anglo-French Union President Harold Wilson clash over the military intervention over Equatorial Guinea,...


March 13, 1972:
Pope Paul VI condemns via encyclical many alchemical formulas linked to necromancy and potion usage, sparking international attention,...


June 3, 1972:
The 3- Powers Agreement between the Soviet Union, Anglo-French Union and United States is hosted by German Chancellor (insert name here) in Berlin,


June 5, 1972:
U.S. Presidential candidate (insert name here) is assassinated by Zionist gunman (insert name here) during a rally in (insert place here),...



Church notes in 2018 so far

January: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/170213533805/church-notes-january-2018

February: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/171257524885/church-notes-february-2018

March: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/172404215310/church-notes-march-2018, https://brenorenz.deviantart.com/journal/Church-notes-March-2018-737924254

April: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/173407301760/church-notes-april-2018, https://brenorenz.deviantart.com/journal/Church-notes-April-2018-742609330

May: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/174294714720/church-notes-may-2018

June: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/175194220400/church-notes-june-2018, https://brenorenz.deviantart.com/journal/Church-notes-June-2018-751239821

July: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/176396549455/church-notes-july-2018, https://www.deviantart.com/brenorenz/journal/Church-notes-July-2018-756804003

August: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/177403642370/church-notes-august-2018

September: http://fardell24b.tumblr.com/post/178596021635/church-notes-september-2018, https://www.deviantart.com/brenorenz/journal/Church-notes-September-2018-766153752


Church notes - 30th September 2018

The Sermon notes from the 20th without those from the rest of the month

30th September
Psalm 51:1, 2
Prayer
- A toddler with Hip Dysplasia

Haggai 1
Background
- Babylonian exile
- Persians allowed Israelites to return
vs 1 - 3
A double standard
- They're saying that it isn't time to rebuild the Temple, but they're living in luxury.

Galatians 5:17
1 Thessalonians 4:7
Colossians 3:15
Don't make excuses for not doing God's Word while making room for your own desires
vs 5 -11
You can't control your own life - the Israelites had forgotten this.

The LORD: - He is saying that it no makes sense as created beings to put our desires ahead of the Creator's
If Relationship with God is not your priority there will always be disappointment and disatisfaction. If you want satisfaction in life your priority is obedience to God.
vs 12 -15
They respond. Their lives change in priority. The rest of our desires are rubbish compared to prioritising God in our own lives.
What does it look like to prioritise God?
What does our obedience to God look like?

Action!
Obedience is not just about good intentions. The Israelites needed to Act. The same applies to us.
Matthew 28:18 - 20
The Great Commission - We are to go forth and make disciples


Church notes - September 2018


On LiveJournal: https://fardell24.livejournal.com/324396.html

On Dreamwidth: https://fardell24.dreamwidth.org/258950.html


Thursday, 27 September 2018

Math101 Revision - Lecture 14


Math101 – Lecture 14 Revision
We say f(x) à L
As x à c, or        lim f(x) = L
                              x à c
if given ℇ > 0 there exists δ 7 such that |f(x) – L| < ℇ whenever |x à c| < δ
Prove formally that
Lim         (x + 1
____ = 1
1 - x)
X à 0

Proof: Let ℇ > 0 given let |x - 0| < δ, ie x |x| < δ with δ to be determined.

We want to prove à
|x + 1
____ - 1               < ℇ, whenever |x| < δ
1 – x      |
We have to find the δ

x + 1                      1 + x – (1 – x)
____ - 1 =            ___________
1 – x                     1 – x

               =             2x
                              ____
                              1 – x

So,
|x + 1                                  |2x
____ - 1               =             ____
1 – x      |                            1 – x|

                                             =             2|x|                      2δ
                                                            ______  <             ______
                                                            |1 + x|                 |1 + x|

|1 - x| > |1| - |x|

For δ < 1 (so |x| < 1), we have (1 – x)  > 1 - |x| > 1 - |x| > 1 – δ


               1                            1
           _______   <            _____
               |1 – x|                  1 – δ




|1 + x                                  2δ                          2δ
_______ - 1        <             _____    <             ____
1 – x           |                       |1 – x|                 1 - δ

                              2δ                                         ℇ
Now choose at _____     = ℇ, ie δ =            ____
                              1 – c                                    2 + ℇ

Then we have
|1 + x                                  2δ          
_______ - 1        <             _____    = ℇ
1 – x           |                       1 – ℇ     

                                             ℇ
Whenever |x| < δ =        ____
                                             2 + ℇ

|x – L| < δ
i.e. – δ < x – c < δ

i.e.
c – δ < x < δ + c

Our limit, so far, are two sided. We take x à c+ (approach from above c) and x à c- (approach from below c)
This will not work for √x as x à 0
We need one sided limits in this case.
eg Discuss the limit x à 1 for
               x2, x > 1
f(x) = {
               1 – x, x < 1



Two sided limits at x = 1
From the left x à 1- , f(x) = 1 – x à 0 but 0 is not in the range of f from the right, x à x+ f(x) = x2 = 1


Limits as x à + ∞
Are one sided.

x à ∞ is from below.

x à -∞ is from above

Formally: - we say f(x) à L as x à ∞, OR               lim          f(x) = L, if given any ℇ > 0 there exists some x
                                                                                          x à
such that |f(x) - L| < 3, whenever x > X.
Prove that 1/x à 0 as x à

Proof: Let ℇ > 0 be given
               Let x > X, X to be determined
               [We want to prove that |1/x| < whenever x > X]
               We can take x > 0, as x > 0 and |1/x| = 1/x < 1/X
               Choose X = 1/ ℇ (as 1/x = ℇ)
So,  |1/x| < ℇ whenever x > 1/ ℇ             e.g. prove that 1/√(x 2+ 1) à 0 as à

Proof: Let ℇ > 0 be given. Let x > X, x to be determined |1/√(x 2+ 1) – 0| = 1/√(x 2+ 1) < 1/x2 <
                                                                                                                        Limit -->
1/X, choose x = 1/ ℇ
Then |1/√(x 2+ 1)| < ℇ for x > X

eg Prove that ((x + 1) -(x - 1))/x à as x à

Proof: Let ℇ > 0 be given Let x > X, X to be determined
Firstly ((x + 1) -(x - 1))/x           =  (((x + 1) -(x - 1))/x) * (((x + 1) + (x + 1))/((x + 1) + (x + 1))
                                                            = ((x + 1) – (x – 1))/(x((x + 1) + (x + 1))
                                                            = 2/(x((x + 1) + (x + 1)) < 2/x
Since (x + 1) + (x + 1) > 1
But 2/x < 2/X, as x > X
((x + 1) -(x - 1))/x < 2/x
Choose x = 2/ℇ (as 2/x = ℇ)
((x + 1) -(x - 1))/x < ℇ
Whenever x > X = 2/ℇ




Rise of Weirdness - Part 23


January 1, 1965:
Reptilicus is sighted in Svalbard...


March 31, 1965:
Tensions mount between the Anglo-French Union and the United States, after a "Orichalum" meteorite crashes in Revelstoke, British Columbia, distributing mystical energy and materials across the region; President Johnson invokes the Monroe Doctrine,....


April 24, 1965:
U.S. troops are deployed to the Dominican Republic, in an effort to prevent the "Communist-inspired" Civil War from expanding in the region,....


26 June 1965
Margaret Watson and Chester James reappear in London. They say nothing about the past one and a half years...


July 4, 1965:
Magic practitioners and beings gather in Washington D.C. led by Tamara Lansdown and Robert Thomason to advocate for civil rights,...


July 20, 1965:
Soviet space officials report that the Zond-3 space probe was destroyed by a strange monolith on the far side of the lunar surface, fueling concern about further space travel by Soviet officials,....


September 19, 1965:
Erwin Rommel is elected Chancellor of Germany, credited with helping to shape the face of post-war Germany,.....


October 28, 1965:
Pope Paul VI warns that tolerance of the "State of Aphrodite" is the "lesser of two evils" with regards to the Cold War against the Communist Bloc,...


December 1, 1965:
Pope Paul VI calls for a ban on the magical substance "Quintessence" , sparking international controversy,...


December 22, 1965:
Plight of Soviet Fluffys starring Peter Rostov and Ekaterina Bolkonsky unveils the extent of the Soviet persecution of Transformed and Neo-pagans, winning the Oscar for Best Picture and Best Director,....


January 13, 1966:
Gary Brown is the first openly Transformed appointed to the U.S. Presidential Cabinet in Washington D.C., sparking national controversy amongst social and religious conservatives,....


February 25, 1966:
Ba'ath Party leaders led by Salah Jadid threaten the overthrow of the Confederation of Palestine in Ramallah, proclaiming the land as Syrian territory,....


April 16, 1966:
Transformed leader Tanya White calls for a camping of non-violence while imprisoned in Minneapolis, signaling the direction of the Transformed rights movement,.....


May 1, 1966:
Captain Ruth Alice Erickson, USN becomes the first female commander of a naval battleship, sparking national attention in Annapolis, Maryland,....


22 May 1966
A group of Transformed fight some advanced robots on the observation platform of the Empire State Building.


July 18 – 20 1966
The Commission of Magical Investigation thwarts a plot to take over London using autonomous tanks.


August 1966
A mysterious mist appears in the London Underground. People start disappearing.

The Commission of Magical Investigation eventually dissipates the strange mist, but the vanished people aren't found...


August 19, 1966:
Soviet Premier Lavrentii Beria calls for a national crackdown on neo-pagans and Transformed as "counter-revolutionary elements" ,...


September 8, 1966:
Star Trek (NBC-TV) makes its hit debut with Leonard Nimoy attracting large Transformed audiences, with many pointing to his half-alien character of "Mr. Spock" as a positive portrayal of Transformed,...


September 17, 1966:
Lake Huron Incident; Tensions mount between the Anglo-French Union and the United States, after a "Orichalum" meteorite crashes into the Great Lakes region of Lake Huron, distributing mystical energy and materials across the region; President Johnson invokes the Monroe Doctrine,....


December 18, 1966:
Kaleidoscope directed by Alfred Hitchcock starring Michael Caine, makes its hit film debut,....

February 5, 1967:
Alberta Incident; Tensions mount between the Anglo-French Union and the United States, after a "Orichalum" meteorite crashes into Vilna, Alberta, Alberta, distributing mystical energy and materials across the region; President Johnson invokes the Monroe Doctrine,.


June 9, 1967:
Anglo-French Union leaders led by Harold McMillan accuse the Johnson Administration of backing Zionist guerrillas in Jericho, fueling tensions between the two super-powers,....


June 10, 1967:
Communist Bloc nations, led the Soviet Union, break diplomatic relations with the "State of Aphrodite" after a summit in Gdansk, Poland,....


June 30, 1967:
Mayor Teddy Kollek of Anchorage, is proclaimed "America's Mayor" citing his progressive policies on race and religion,...


July 3, 1967:
Anglo-French Union deploys military forces into Mogadishu, Somalia, fueling racial and sectarian tensions throughout Eastern Africa,....


July 12, 1967:
Following the success of Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band, John Lennon comes out as having been a Transformed for a year and a half, sparking international attention...


July 23, 1967:
Puerto Rico becomes the 51st State of the Union after a national referendum, sparking national attention,...


August 17, 1967:
Indian leaders led by Indian Prime Minister Deen Dayal Upadhyaya claim the Anglo-French Union and Commonwealth of Nations are launching "sabotage campaigns", largely dismissed by Western media outlets,....


October 30-November 1, 1967:
Devil's Night; anti-Transformed riots erupt in Detroit, Michigan, forcing a declaration of martial law over the city,...


December 21, 1967:
Columbus Riots; Police and magic practitioners/beings clash in Columbus, Ohio after years of police abuse,...



Wednesday, 26 September 2018

The Engineer and the Time Lady v1


The Engineer and the Time Lady
Unknown planet
The starship was in trouble. It was out of control, entering the atmosphere of an M-Class planet, such that the crash landing would be terrible.


Crash!


Some time later.

The ship was still, especially in the main computer room. The red-alert was still flashing there. “Warning! Estimated time to total system failure: 1 day 18 hours.” An alert tone sounded.

Initiating starship preservation protocol.”

Then there was a hum. “Activating Emergency Engineering Hologram Alpha.”

The hologram of a female engineer appeared. “Please state the nature of the Engineering Emergency.”


Approximately 10 standard years ago; USS Ionia NCC 89401 crash-landed on an unknown M-Class planet. The Starship Preservation Protocol has been initiated,” the computer reported.

“Understood,” the engineering hologram stated. A screen activated on the side of the computer core.

Emergency fuel cells for the computer core are very low. Reinitialise the Warp Core.

That was only the first of a long list of tasks that needed to be performed.

“Computer, run a level 5 diagnostic on the holoprojectors between the Computer Core and Engineering.”

Affirmative,” the computer said.

A minute later, the diagnostic was complete. “... Holoprojectors are functional.”


The hologram stopped outside of engineering.

“Computer, run a level 5 diagnostic on the holoprojectors in Engineering.”

The holoprojectors were functional, so she entered.

The emergency lighting was on, giving the room a sombre appearance. The hologram briefly wondered why Starfleet would program their holograms with such recognition subroutines. She shook her head and went to the powerless core.

She checked the fuel (the antimatter and deuterium) levels. Both fuels would last for a long time. She was ready to restart the core. “Computer, active Emergency Engineering Hologram Beta.”
The Core re-start required two officer.
“Affirmative.”



The Matrix Revolutions review


57 The Matrix Revolutions
Rewatch. The last of the Matrix films. This film is an improvement upon the previous film, although still not as good as the original. The consequences of the events in the previous film are well realised. Neo is 'The One', but in a way that isn't expected. He manages to negotiate a peace between the humans and the machines, and defeat Smith. The desperation of the commander of Zion's forces is well realised. As is that of the other Zion forces. The scenes showing the defense of Zion are well done.
But, there is a lot more to this film. Neo's opening scenes, where he meets the family of programs in the station, are rather well written. Neo finds that there still more to the machines that he didn't know about. The interaction between Neo and the 'Trainman' is short and to the point. Neo's discovery that he can't leave the station by other means is also well done. This leads to Trinty going the Oracle to find out what is going on. This part is written well, but is rather short, going straight from her going to the Oracle to her finding Neo.
The rest of the film as Zion fights to defend itself, while Neo confronts Smith, is rather good. The alternation between the scenes was executed well. The scene where the ship takes out the Machines attacking Zion's dock, is particularly well done (as well as the chewing out of Morpheus afterwards). However, that is not the climax of the film. That is the final fight between Neo and Smith. But to get to that, he and Trinity have to fight past various machines to get to the Machine City.
That sequence is good, showing that Neo's powers are developing, as he approaches his destiny. However, the climactic battle between Neo and Smith is what the film has been building up to. The cinematography involved in this sequence is amazing. The Wachowskis had outdone themselves from the original film. Overall, it is a satisfying ending to the trilogy after the disappointing middle instalment, and almost as good as the original. 8.75/10.