Thursday, 30 January 2020

Doctor Who - Fugitive of the Judoon review


Fugitive of the Judoon
The fifth episode of Series 12. Certainly an interesting episode. Some developments that are certainly controversial, but more on that below. The Judoon isolate Gloucester, England (as there are other Gloucester's named after it) in their search for a fugitive. In the TARDIS, the 'fam' have noticed that the Doctor has been more moody, have been leaving them behind occasionally. (Occasional trips to Gallifrey. For what reason? Other than to mope in the ruins?) This scene was done well.
In Gloucester, we are introduced to travel agent Ruth, and her husband Lee, who's lives are turned upside down by the arrival of the Judoon. (Of course, it seems that a lot of others lives are also turned upside down, but this is the couple we focus on.) There is also a baker, who likes Ruth, but despises Lee. Not sure to what to make of character, even if the Judoon commander disintegrates him. But there is more to both of them than meets the eye. Especially when it comes to Ruth, but more on that below.
However, there is something else going on. Captain Jack Harkness is back, with a warning for the Doctor. A very effective appearance. That he would confuse Graham for the Doctor is believable. His reaction to learning that the Doctor is now female was about what I expected. Him confusing Yas for the Doctor was also believable. But, his warning. The Lone Cyberman. That is certainly leading somewhere. And what has to do with the Timeless Child and the below revelation, I'm not sure...
Lee is taken out by the Judoon, but not before sending Ruth a cryptic message: 'Go into the light and break the glass.' The Doctor takes Ruth to her former home at a lighthouse. Ruth turns out to be a Time Lord! This whole sequence was done very well. Appropriately tense. However, the Doctor digs up Ruth's parents' grave, and discovers, a Police Box? Ruth then comes up and introduces herself as, the Doctor! Like, huh? How does that work? And a past Doctor, as Gallifrey still exists for her...
Certainly the Doctor, the one we're familiar with, is confused. Her confusion was very well done. And her realisation, that with the Timeless Child, Jack and the other Doctor, that Time is swirling around her was done quite well also. 9.2/10.

30th January 2020 Writings


30th

Excerpt from: Adventures at Mara Brown
“I'm still waiting for confirmation here,” Danielle said.

Understood,” Colin said.

Words: 11

Excerpt from: Chronicles of Time: The Danae Error
“You’ll go back to the Titanic. I was there, so she’ll be there.”

“The Titanic?” Jess asked. “That makes no sense.”

“You’ll know when you’re there.”

Jess sighed.


14 April 1912
“I’m here, and I still don’t know, Daniel!” she groused. Maybe it would be a good idea to just let Danae replace Daniel? She shook her head. That wasn’t a good idea. But she failed to understand how being on Titanic would help her fix the timeline. She looked at the time again. Nine minutes before the first of the groups of other time travellers would arrive (at least those Daniel was aware of) and 29 minutes before the ship hit the iceberg.

Jess emerged from the time vehicle.

Words: 120

Total: 131


29th January 2020 Writings


29th

Excerpt from: The Engineer and the Time Lady
Alpha waited in the Shuttle Bay. It had been four hours since Nina had left the marooned ship. She wondered why she was taking so long. She had gone over the Starfleet records on the encounters with the Doctor. Those hadn't really been illuminating, hardly applicable to the situation she found herself in, despite there being Voyager logs in the mix. She had re-read Captain Janeway's report on her third encounter with the Doctor when she heard the sound of the TARDIS beginning to arrive. “Finally.”

The TARDIS landed. Alpha could see that it was once again disguised as a shuttle, and was adorned with the Baffin's registry number on it's sides. Nina emerged. She still looked a little wet from her dip in the ocean, although she was no longer soaked. “Why do you look worried?” she asked.

“It's over four hours since you left that ship,” Alpha replied. “What happened out there?”

“It's nothing,” Nina said with a shake of her head.

It was clearly not nothing, but Alpha decided to give her the benefit of the doubt.

Words: 180


Excerpt from: Doctor Who – Troubles of Ronisaka
“This is but a temporary setback,” Kamasagi retorted.

“No doubt of that,” Clara said.

“Clara!” the Doctor objected.

“We’ll have to investigate further,” she said.

“Oh, you’re good,” Kamasagi said with sarcasm.

Clara just responded with a glare.

“Of course,” the Doctor said. “But there is something else you should be aware of,” the Doctor said as he parried a blow.

“What’s that?” Kamasagi said as he locked blades with Mariko.

“You have underestimated me,” the Doctor said. He brandished his ‘sonic’ device again.

Words: 84


Excerpt from: Star Wars – A Skywalker’s Journey
Rey knew staying on Tattooine wasn’t an option. The planet reminded her too much of Jakku. Then there was the fact the Hutts ran the place. She approached the Falcon, which had landed close to the abandoned Lars moisture farm. “Time to go,” she said to Chewbacca.

Where?” he asked.

“Naboo,” she answered. “It may be where my grandfather came from, but it’s also where their mother came from.

Chewie nodded as he boarded the ship ahead of her.


The Falcon emerged from hyperspace into the Naboo system.

Words: 88

Total: 352




Tuesday, 28 January 2020

Beginnings of 2020 - A Skywalker's Journey


Star Wars – A Skywalker’s Journey
Rey knew staying on Tattooine wasn’t an option. The planet reminded her too much of Jakku. Then there was the fact the Hutts ran the place. She approached the Falcon, which had landed close to the abandoned Lars moisture farm.

Quinn's Code - Cafe Geekdale Part 1


Sunday, October 17, 2005
It was quiet in downtown Lawndale.

Too quiet.

Then the Alt.Lawndale.Com Cybercafe was broken into. The theives make off with computer equipment as an alarm rings. They manage to get away before the police arrive...



Quinn's Code (A Daria AU)
Installment 3: Cafe Geekdale
Monday, October 18, 2005
Quinn Morgendorffer grabbed the morning paper as she entered the kitchen. “Break in at downtown Cybercafe!” she exclaimed.

“Gaaaahhhhh! I thought this town was safe!” her father, Jake, exclaimed as he came into the kitchen.

“Daddy, the crime statistics for Lawndale are much lower than those for Highland,” Quinn said.

“They are?” Jake asked.

“Yes, the statistics for Highland are twenty times higher than those for Lawndale,” Quinn's sister, Daria, said as she approached the kitchen.

“Oh!” Jake said.

“What's this about a break-in?” Daria asked.

Quinn read from the paper; “Late last night, the Alt.Lawndale.Com Cybercafe was broken into and Computer equipment stolen, police sources say. This is the ninth break-in at a Lawndale business this year.”

Daria grabbed the paper from her sister and looked at the article herself. “Interesting,” she said.

“What is?” Quinn asked.

“It says here that the Cybercafe is jointly owned by the Carter County School District and Lawndale State University,” Daria said.

“That is interesting,” Quinn said.

“Are you saying that a cybercafe is owned by the educational institutions?” their mother, Helen, asked as she came to the kitchen.

Daria handed the paper to her mother.

“Oh, my! A break-in. That never happened to a cybercafe in Highland.”

“I don't think there are any cybercafe's in Highland,” Quinn said. “At least, I never heard of any,” she said.

“You do have a point there,” Helen said, after some thought.

“If there was, they would have been broken into almost as soon as they had opened,” Daria said as she put some bread into the toaster.

Both Helen and Quinn had to admit that was a correct assessment of that town.
“Well, this probably not the last time we're going to hear about this,” Helen concluded.

Quinn met her friends Kristen Bell and Cindy Robinson-Brolsma halfway to school, near Cindy's street.

“Hi, guys.” Quinn said, coming along side them.

“Hi, Quinn,” Kristen said, brushing her dyed red, bangs out of her eyes.

“Morning, Quinn,” Cindy said, as she pushed her trapezoidal glasses up her nose.

Have you read the Sun-Herald this morning?” Quinn asked.

“I haven't, I usually read the paper after school,” Kristen said.

“This is about the Cybercafe, right?” Cindy asked.

“Right, it's bad that people break into places, but that is low. I mean some people can only get access to the internet at a cybercafe,” Quinn said.

“You're right, but that wasn't the only cybercafe that Lawndale has. There are a few others, and more in Oakwood and elsewhere in the county besides,” Cindy said.

“Oh,” Quinn said. 'Of course there would be more in town. Lawndale's almost a city afterall,' she thought.

Mr. Fun's Games, Cafe and Internet is a particularly good one for instance,” Cindy said in remembrance.

That's because you spent most of seventh grade playing Counter-Strike there.” Kristen said.

“Good times,” Cindy said.

'Counter-Strike? Eeeewww!' Quinn thought. Then again, she did play Halo on her X-Box. 'But that has a story.' “So that place is still open?” she said.

“Definitely!” Cindy said.

“With the VR-simulator and a 32 PC LAN, it is the most popular venue for multiplayer gaming in Lawndale,” Kristen said.

“Cool,” Quinn said.

“That is understating it,” Kristen said.

They continued talking about the many Cybercafes in Lawndale as they continued on their way to school.


Class, I thought today we'd take a break from the tragedy of Romeo and Juliet to discuss the real life tragedy that happened last night here in Lawndale. Let's share our feelings of violation following the loss of our beloved cybercafe alt.lawndale.com,” Mr. O'Neill said to the Sophomore Language Arts class. “Who would like to start.” He looked at Kevin. “Charles? Charles, did you hear me?”

You mean, Kevin?” Kevin said confused.

Kevin, heh. I'm sorry. You uh, look like somebody else. What do you have to say about last night's horrible event?”

“I was home all night. You can ask my parents. Besides we have a computer,Kevin said,

No, Kevin. I mean, how did the theft make you feel?” the teacher asked.

'You're asking the wrong person!' Jennifer Burns thought. She thought that the break in at the Cybercafe was the action of people who should have known better.

Um, sad?” Kevin finally said.

Are you asking me or telling me?” Mr. O'Neill asked.

Angry?” Kevin said.

Mr. O'Neill was in thought, then he asked Jodie Landon what she thought about the cybercafe break in.

I think the cybercafé served one very particular segment of the community, but it still pisses me off when people take what isn't theirs,” Jodie said.

That's how I feel!” Kevin broke in.

'Oh, Kevin, Kevin, Kevin!' Jennifer thought, knowing that the QB was a lost cause. 'Why does he have to focus on football so?'

Thank you, Kevin. Jodie, about that word, 'community.' Isn't that the whole idea of a cybercafé? To jack us into the global community? I think what's most disturbing about this crime is the symbolism involved. Don't you agree, Jane?”

No,” Jane Lane said.

Suddenly, we're cut off. We can't hail our friends across the globe and say, '"It's a beautiful day in the cyberhood.' They didn't just take a few computers. They took the symbol of our virtual community. To visit alt.lawndale.com was to come together with the planet!”

'Cyberhood! I am sure Cindy, and a few others, would be pleased to correct you about that!' Jennifer thought.

Oh, come on,” Daria said.

Yes?” Mr. O'Neill asked.

Come together with the planet? By staring at a screen for hours? Sitting in a room full of people you never say a word to?” Daria said.

'Very good point, Daria,' Jennifer thought.

Hmm, Interesting point, Dorian,” the teacher said.

It's Daria!” Daria exclaimed.

'Easy, Daria!' Jennifer thought.

Jane looked at Daria as if to say “What brought that on?”

Sorry, Uh! Damn spiders. Daria, you believe that while connecting Lawndale citizens to our global neighbors, the cafe was alienating us from each other.”

I'm saying if you really miss the place, put a Mr. Coffee in the computer lab,” Daria said.

So, in your opinion, what we really need is a return to the traditional coffee house of yore, where you'd watch some performers and share a cup with your friends, face to face.”

'Uh, oh!' Jennifer thought.

You're a visionary,” Jane said sardonically.

The coffee house! We'll plan it, locate it, raise the money, and open it!”

Daria blanched “Would that qualify as an extracurricular activity?”

Of course,” Mr O'Neill said.

Then I'd like to register as a conscientious objector,” Daria said.




28th January 2020 Writings


28th

Excerpt from: Changes in Time and Space
“We could try the records at each station after where my 'reckless action' occurred,” Felicia suggested.

“Worth a shot,” Tamsin considered.

“He may have deleted the records, but we'll try,” the Doctor said.

Words: 33



Excerpt from: The Engineer and the Time Lady
“It is proving more difficult than first thought.”

“No!” the crewmember then gave a signal and most of those pointing the crossbows cocked them.

“Yikes!” Nina said, her heart beating fast. She then jumped overboard and swam back to the TARDIS.


Alpha saw Nina jump overboard. “What just happened? They weren't firing.” She saw her swim back to the TARDIS, which soon dematerialised.


“That was close!” Nina said as she set the course back to the Baffin. She was still breathing heavily. She set the ship in motion and ran from the console room, heading to the Zero Room.


Alpha waited in the Shuttle Bay. It had been four hours since Nina had left the marooned ship.

Words: 117

Total: 150

27th January 2020 Writings


27th

Excerpt from: The Engineer and the Time Lady
“Well, we don't.”

“Your ship looks rather stuck,” Nina pointed out.

“We are in trouble,” another crewmember admitted.

“Danoal!” the first crewmember chastised.

“If she wants to help...”

“No we can repair and relaunch the ship ourselves.”

Words: 37


Excerpt from: The Chronicles of Time: The Danae Error
“You’ll go back to the Titanic. I was there, so she’ll be there.”

“The Titanic?” Jess asked. “That makes no sense.”

Words: 21


Excerpt from: Age of Heroes v2
January 7, 1976
In New Zealand, Prime Minister Robert Muldoon receives a report on the Meteor Shower.

January 13, 1976
There is another report of a 'super' rescuing a person from a burning building in San Francisco.

January 14, 1976
Brezhnev receives a report that meteors had fallen in all 15 SSRs...

January 16, 1976
In a statement to the BBC, Wilson reveals that there had been reports of meteors in every county in the United Kingdom.

February 29, 1976
The 12 year old who had the precognitive vision two weeks before runs away from home.

March 2, 1976
Vanderbilt decides to cooperate with the police when it comes to fighting crime.

March 3, 1976
Vanderbilt discovers that she can also phase others through walls (as long as she's holding onto them).

March 4, 1976
Vanderbilt takes the alias of 'Phase Lady'.

March 5, 1976
Some meteoric material washes up on Coogee Beach (to the south of Bondi), Sydney...

March 6, 1976
A second meteor is found of the grounds of the University of New England (in the duck pond near Mary White College...)

March 7, 1976
A second meteor is found in the Warrumbungles ranges, near the Grand High Tops.

March 8, 1976
In a report delivered to Muldoon, there are over 1000 reported metahumans in New Zealand.

April 11, 1976
Some meteoric material washes up on Cronulla beach (southern Sydney)...

February 27, 1976
On a Concorde headed to Paris, a teenager suddenly freaks out, as her vision-related powers activate...

August 11, 1977
First appearance in Coffs Harbour of LaserEyes...

June 10, 1981
In Canberra, the Capital Territory Academy for Supers is established. This is the first Australian academy for Teen Metahumans.

June 11, 1981
Singer Ringo Starr announces his support for metahumans.

August 10, 1981
In Canberra, Prime Minister Malcolm Fraser announces the formation of an agency for the monitoring of provision of assistance to metahumans.

September 10, 1981
Lennon releases a new song. Meta Love Story.

October 11, 1981
Astrid Stien begins calling Police ahead of time to have people caught in the act...

August 5, 2002
“I know,” Ar-TK said. “But we could go around Armidale tonight, and talk while we do it.”

“That's a good idea,” Led-audir considered.

“So, you have any special equipment we'll need before we go down-town?”

“Not much, just a bike. But we don't need it tonight.”

“Let's go then.”

Half an hour later, the two metas left the University grounds to the southeast, turning the corner from Elm Avenue into Queen Elizabeth Drive. “Where first?” Ar-TK asked.

“We'll circle Girraween first,” Led-audir answered, referring to a public housing estate between the University and the older parts of Armidale.

“Sure.”


The two metas soon came to the overpass, where Queen Elizabeth Drive crossed over the New England Highway. “This is a good spot,” AR-TK said.

“Huh?” Led-audir asked.

“We can talk about our abilities,” she paused. “If you want to, that is.”

“Um, sure,” Led-audir said, sounding a little nervous. “We can.” He put his hands on the railings. “It can't really be demonstrated. I focus and then I can use it to sense.”

“There is a way,” AR-TK interjected.

“Oh?”

“Telekinesis is merely my primary power.”

“So, you're a telepath too?” Led-audir guessed.

She nodded. “Yes, but quite weak. It only works via touch. I would receive what you're sensing, sight, hearing, touch, your ability, and your surface thoughts, nothing more,” she added in a reassuring way.

Words: 577

Total: 635


Sunday, 26 January 2020

Quinn's Code - Invite of the Geek - Conclusion


As the boisterous gatecrashers entered the living room, Quinn and Jeffy stopped dancing. “Um, Quinn, it looks like there is going to be some trouble here,” Jeffy said.

You're right. It's about time to leave,” Quinn said. Kristen, Cindy, Joey and Jamie also stopped dancing as the gatecrashers proceeded to interrupt dance routines and conversations.

Time to be going!” Cindy said. 'This is definitely not something I want to be involved in,' she thought.

I agree,” Kristen said. They then began to leave.

Brittany and Angie could be heard yelling at the gatecrashers in the background.

Why did you have to crash my party!”

As they walked out of the estate, Daria, Jennifer and Jane saw a couple of police cars scream past them towards the party.

Are you sure that Quinn will be alright?” Jennifer asked. 'I don't want to know why the police would be going there,' she thought.

She is too savy for that,” Daria said.

So you think that she would be leaving as a result of those college aged crashers?” Jennifer asked.

Yes,” Daria said.


Quinn, her friends and the Three Js left the mansion via the back door and went towards the adjacent woods.

Are you sure its safe?” Joey asked. 'That Metalmouth story involved some woods on the edge of town...'

It's a gated estate, of couse it's safe!” Quinn said.

Cindy looked into the woods. She could see some of the street lights on the other side. “Let's go,” she said and lead the group in.

Ten minutes later, they emerged from the woods near the gatehouse, where Daria, Jane and Jennifer were encamped. Daria and Jane were quizzing the estate residents as they arrived home from whatever activites they had attended. Jennifer was looking on with mixed amusement.
What are they doing?” Quinn asked.

They are asking the estate residents rather, embarrassing questions. Like old ladies their age,” Jennifer explained.
That's to be expected, I guess,” Quinn said, in response. 'At least its better than what she did to those two things back in Highland,' she thought. The group sat down next to Jennifer and waited for the other two to join them.


Sandi, Tiffany and Tori slipped out of the Taylor's mansion whilst the police were talking to Brittany and Kevin.

This party is a bust. This is a case where, like, it would be better for the parents to be at, rather than not,” Sandi said.

How are we getting home?” Tiffany asked.

We ask someone for a lift!” Sandi said.

There's Robert!” Tori said.

Yes, Tori dear, ask him,” Sandi said.

Tori sighed and walked up to Robert Korleski, as he approached his car.

'At least its a good car.' “Robert? Could you give me and a couple of friends a lift home?” she asked.

Sure, Ma'am,” Robert said, politely.

Cool,” Tori said, and waved Sandi and Tiffany over.

You can sit up front, Ma'am,” Robert said as Sandi and Tiffany approached.

Thanks!” Tori said as she quickly got into the front passenger seat.

Sandi grumbled as she got in behind Robert, but otherwise said nothing. She knew she would have done the same in her place.


As people stopped entering the estate, Daria and Jane turned to the group. “What are your plans about getting home, Daria?” Cindy asked, knowing that Quinn didn't want to ask.

We wait for someone leaving the party who is willing to take us home. Otherwise we walk,” Daria said.

I suppose,” Cindy said, remembering the discussion she, Kristen and Quinn had had that afternoon. She settled down to wait.

She didn't have to wait long. Robert's car with the Fashion Club came roaring out of the estate.

Keep driving,” Sandi directed.

Robert looked at her in the rear view mirror. “Yes, Ma'am,” he said, even though he felt that there was enough room for one of the other girls or for one of his team mates. 'Next time will be different,' he thought as he drove past.

Ooh, that Sandi!” Quinn exclaimed.

We can get the next car,” Kristen said.

Yeah, we can,” Quinn said, calming down.


A few minutes later, Jodie and Mack pulled up in Mack's white Plymouth Valiant.

Anyone need a lift?” he asked.

Sure, Mack,” Jeffy said.

Sure, Mack,” Jamie said

Sure, Mack,” Joey said.

Before any of the girls could object, the Three Js piled into the back seat.

Jodie saw that there was room in the front for another person so she undid her belt and moved over next to Mack. “There is room for one more.”

The girls all looked at each other. Daria didn't particulary want to go with any male admirers of Quinn. Quinn thought that seeing Cindy and Kristen home would be a good idea. Jane thought that Daria needed her company. Cindy decided to wait. So did Kristen. So it was Jennifer who ended up sitting next to Jodie in Mack's car.

Bye,” she said, waving. “I'll see you tomorrow, Jane,” she said as she got in.

Just not too early,” Jane said, with a smirk.

Of course not, it will be Sunday,” Jennifer said, with a small smile, before closing the door.


Mack then drove off. The Three Js continued waving out of the windows at Quinn until Mack had driven out of sight.

There will be a few more cars, I guess,” Jane said.

There's no doubt about that,” Daria said.

We will take the next car,” Quinn said.

It would depend on who's driving,” Kristen said.

Maybe,” Quinn said.


A minute later, another car came along. Upchuck wound down the passenger side window and said; “You ladies in need of a knight in shining armor?”

Can't we just take the armor and ditch the knight?” Daria asked.

Hey, it's a package deal, Toots!” Upchuck said.

'Like we would have taken his car and just left him here,' Quinn thought. She turned to her friends. “Let's go.”

Cindy moved to get into the back seat, but Kristen objected. “Ride home with Upchuck! Really?” she said, with scorn in her voice.

If you're worried about him finding out where you live, Kristen, you can come to my place,” Quinn said.

Would you risk having to ride home with Kevin?” Daria asked.

Kristen thought for a few moments. 'Both are very good points,' she thought. She definitely didn't want to drive home with Kevin. 'And I don't want to walk home alone.'

You don't have to look at him,” Jane said, as she sat in the front, and trying to ignore Upchuck's grin.

You do have a point,” Kristen said to Daria.

Let's go,” Daria said.

I'm coming,” Kristen said, as she got in behind Jane.

Quinn, Cindy and Daria got in the other side, with Daria behind Upchuck. “We're ready,” Daria said.

Upchuck drove away from the Estate.

Where to first?” he asked.

1111 Glen Oaks Lane,” Quinn said.

Good street,” Upchuck said. A few moments later he went back into 'tour guide mode'; “To your left, the home of the town director of public works, built on unstable landfill. To your right, a flattened squirrel. Straight ahead, the future!”

Stuff a sock in it, Upchuck!” Daria said.

Upchuck growled his usual flirtatious growl. “Fiesty!

'It really was a good party. That dancing was great. I don't know what to make of Jeffy though,' Quinn thought.


Finis



26th January 2020 Writings


25th

Excerpt from: Age of Heroes v2
January 4, 1976
In the Vatican, the Pope receives a report on unusual activity in Rome...

February 24, 1976
Some meteoric material washes up on Bondi Beach, east of Sydney, New South Wales.

February 25, 1976
Liz Vanderbilt, the Western Australian who discovered she could walk through walks 16 days before, catches a would be thief...

May 5, 1980
In Mackay, Queensland, Wayne Roberts, a mechanic apprentice, discovers that his skin is flameproof...

October 5, 1980
In Tennant Creek, Northern Territory, Albert Roberts, a meta from Darwin, begins helping the disadvantaged indigenous community in the town.

November 8, 1980
In Mount Gambier, South Australia, Astrid Stein, a secretary, discovers that she has super-acute hearing, as well as precognitive abilities...

August 5, 2002
'Led-audir' was nervous as he approached the university cafe. He was going to meet the meta who would be his partner in his investigations. He checked his watch again. Nearly 9PM. After dinner he had studied in the Library and then changed into his suit and exited via a secret route beneath the radio station and Student Association offices. He entered the cafe from the courtyard to the north, and saw a young woman wearing a mask and a jumper with an insignia on it...

He walked up to her. “Armidale TK?” he asked.

“Yes,” she answered, standing up. “Led-audir?”

“Yes,” he answered, holding out his hand. She took it and shook.

“I would like to join you in your investigations,” Armidale TK said nervously. “But I'd like to get to know you better first.”

“That's reasonable, but that would take time,” Led-audir said.

“I know,” Ar-TK said. “But we could go around Armidale tonight, and talk while we do it.”

“That's a good idea,” Led-audir considered.

Total: 289